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Song for Samantha
Contributed by
ZiltzWiltz
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:22:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I still got thoughts of you in my head
I still wish that i was dead
everytime i think of you
thinking of anyone else but me
I still got your art on my wall
all the little pictures you used to draw
that you gave to me
and they're safe with me
I still got your lips on my cheek
from that little kiss ya gave to me
when you were walking away from me
and thats where it will always be
I still got memories from years ago
of you with me and me with you
walking on a gray sunday
out there by the lake
I still got your face in my heart
and you know its like a work of art
your smile it shines
with your big green eyes
i still think of you everyday
and when i turn i have to look away
because your no where to be seen
since you were stolen from me.
Copyright ©
ZiltzWiltz
... [
2004-11-07 18:22:21]
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Re: Song for Samantha
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:40:32 PM AEST
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Beautifully touching...so sad...
Jenni |
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Re: Song for Samantha
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:42:54 PM AEST
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| Aww... That's sad. Still I think that's a long time to go without washing lipstick off of your face. (J/K) The rhyme is really good though. Cheers! |
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Re: Song for Samantha
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by Solnubis on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:35:28 PM AEST
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I liked the rythming in your poem and it is very sad. It's hard to let of go pain especially of the pain of a love one.
Hope all is well. |
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