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will we be remembered
Contributed by
amatt
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:06:34 PM in AEST
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when all is gone
when we are gone
all life is done
will we be remembered
when i have died
when you have died
both of us dead
will we be remembered
if something comes to our planet
and takes us over
stops us from living
will we be remembered?
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Re: will we be remembered
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:50:00 AM AEST
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I matters not if we are remembered. Each of us are special created in Gods Image.
Keep writting you have so much to offer. :)
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Re: will we be remembered
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:31:30 PM AEST
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| A good beginning. You might capitalize the beginnings of your lines and add punctuation. Cheers! |
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Re: will we be remembered
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:27:57 AM AEST
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| too redundant. |
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