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Variations on a Theme
Contributed by
merry
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Close encounter when we passed
Touched by lightening
Shrunken souls
Harried by the wind
Lifting my skirt
You’ve been there before
Drowning in sorrows
Of your own making
I danced in your arms
Until sin wormed its way in between us
Chilled your lips
Burdened by kissing
Sweet words withered
Into hissing lies
That boiled over into arguments
Transparent alibis
I never wanted this ending
Fevered dreams and tears
My mind is playing tricks on me
Wounded heart bleeds
As if it never felt before
Variations on a theme
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-11-07 16:29:59]
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Re: Variations on a Theme
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:40:29 PM AEST
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I never wanted this ending
Who does? Or maybe it's the beginning we really didn't want. Another insightful and fascinating write.
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Re: Variations on a Theme
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:53:13 PM AEST
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Sometimes life throws bricks. Merry, this is excellent.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Variations on a Theme
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:59:45 PM AEST
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ohhh Gaille...this one tears at the heart. Love is born..and love dies.
You are truly a gifted writer.
Roses for my daisy
Larry
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Re: Variations on a Theme
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:09:41 AM AEST
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| You're every letter as incredible as I wish I was!!! Great write.. |
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