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Friendship Fall
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:02:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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phone clicks
tone responds
friendship fall
into shambles
no redemption
adoption papers ripped
bonds broken
hearts cracked
blood seeping out
from the pulsating muscle
a part of me--
ripped away
not understand
grasping
wondering
wishing for truth...
why?
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faith_my_eyes
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2004-11-07 16:02:35]
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Re: Friendship Fall
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:41:40 PM AEST
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Wow! This is the kind of poetry I love. It's so gripping, real, pulling. Makes me wonder if you're OK...you are OK, right? Impressive stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Friendship Fall
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by Nezenic on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:06:43 PM AEST
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| I hope everything's okay. |
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Re: Friendship Fall
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:16:08 PM AEST
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Ouch. This is a painful one. I hope there's plenty of balm to the feeling behind this (not the event itself) sometime. If you know what I mean.
Andrew |
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Re: Friendship Fall
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:02:09 AM AEST
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This definitely got my attention. So painful and so quick that it seems hopeless...yet you know better, fellow warrior. Take care.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Friendship Fall
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:56:24 PM AEST
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This one spoke to my heart, Em. It touched me deep inside.
Really well written.
I love you.
Take care.
David |
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