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Changing Conviction
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:39:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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What I want.
What I do not.
What I will do.
What I will not.
A fading truth
Thoughts unclear
A drifting mind
Vice drawn near.
Confusion reigns
Shackles, chains.
Convictions yell
Regret, hell.
Internal power
Eternal light
Mortal child
Spiritual fight.
Desperation
Heavenly aid
Motivation
Changes made.
Warriors, help!
Guard my way.
Push me onward--
I am astray.
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Re: Changing Conviction
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:41:41 PM AEST
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incredible write. I know how this feels. May the Lord bring you back to a place of peace and rest.
Em |
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Re: Changing Conviction
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:47:25 PM AEST
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| different, but quite good. i wish you the best of luck. :) |
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Re: Changing Conviction
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:51:41 PM AEST
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Strong and direct.
Well written. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Changing Conviction
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:56:50 PM AEST
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Very powerful. Confusion is displayed very well, letting the reader know that you're confused, yet not confusing him. Well done.
Take care, Carre.
I love you.
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Re: Changing Conviction
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:22:39 AM AEST
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Snappy. I tend to like the flowing verses better, to be honest, but this was well done. And the message got through quite well.
Warrior yourself.
Andrew |
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