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Falling, Let Them Come
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:32:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My stomach is turning
For jealousy is devouring.
Crying--
I'm crying now.
Crying to let bitterness escape.
Crying to forget.
Crying to truly see.
In solitude I cry.
My mind is visualizing
For memories are playing.
Crying--
Crying because I do see.
Crying because I knew.
Crying because you lied.
In suffering I cry.
My heart is hurting
For love is consuming.
Crying--
Crying to understand.
Crying because I never will.
Crying because it hurts.
In sorrow I cry.
My eyes are hiding
For tears are flooding.
Crying--
Crying for you.
Crying because of you...
Crying--
In silence I cry.
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2004-11-07 15:32:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Falling, Let Them Come
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:34:44 PM AEST (User
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beautifully expressed.... and whoever did this to you, my carriebearie...
LET ME AT 'EM! |
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Re: Falling, Let Them Come
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:36:55 PM AEST (User
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It has to be the most painful thing to be lied to by someone you loved and trusted. You have expressed that anguish well.
Stitch |
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Re: Falling, Let Them Come
(User Rating: 1 ) by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST (User
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Sorry, I forgot to write the date that I wrote this poem....woops, so just for me to keep record, here it is: 11-5-04. |
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Re: Falling, Let Them Come
(User Rating: 1 ) by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:49:35 PM AEST (User
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Wow.... I think this is one of the mosy powerful poem I've ever read. Great job. |
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Re: Falling, Let Them Come
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:51:56 PM AEST (User
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Emotions are seen in an awesome manner, you convey them very well. Well written, Carrie.
Take care,
I love you.
David |
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Re: Falling, Let Them Come
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:16:04 AM AEST (User
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Raw and powerful. Somehow, it seems not as suited to English as to, hmm. Maybe Spanish. Ever think of translating one of your English poems? I think it'd be interesting.
Excellent job here, and may God's peace keep you.
Andrew |
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