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Invisible
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:46:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm the face in the crowd
Passed by unnoticed
I'm the voice crying out
Unheard
I'm the girl in the back
blending into the shadows
The one you all choose to ignore
I'm the one drowned in silence
In her own little world
The girl lost in darkness
and writing
I'm the mind that refuses
to break through from silence
And speak words meant to be spoken
I'm the face in the crowd
None can recall
The voice who's words
mean nothing at all
The girl in the back
with missunderstood thoughts
The one in the future
who will soon be forgot
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2004-11-07 12:46:32]
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Re: Invisible
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:57:10 PM AEST
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very sad, I feel invisible to the world sometimes too, very well expressed poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Invisible
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:17:10 PM AEST
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i know just how you feel!
this was well expressed.
it's an excellent poem.
you're feeling like crap i, so what i'm saying will proberly mean nothing to you, it wouldn't have reached me when i was where you are now but i care so if you ever want to chat then just PM me.
i'll ALWAYS be around, i promise! |
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Re: Invisible
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 05:11:31 PM AEST
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I think this captures at least one day in everyone’s life. Somedays I wish this really would happen, just become invisible to all. Good expression of emotion, enjoyed this very much.
Laurie |
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Re: Invisible
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by DesperateSoul on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:21:35 AM AEST
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| Very real very good write!!! Keep posting!! |
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Re: Invisible
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:12:12 PM AEST
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WOW! all of your poems that i have read are like reading my own work.....i know all of these feelings sooo well...its scary....awesome job.....i loved it
Lots of Love
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