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I Am No China Doll
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:46:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am not delicate like a china doll,
Even though depression has took its toll,
I am as tough as a pair of old boots,
From the hip is where I always shoot.
I resemble a butterfly, but sting like a bee,
I am proud of who I am, I am proud to be me,
To look at me you wouldn’t think,
That I am a bad girl who loves to drink.
I always make sure that I look nice,
But underneath I’m not all sugar & spice,
Looks can be so very deceiving,
Behind the make-up is a lost soul grieving.
I look like a princess with my long, flowing hair,
But can cut you dead with my icy stare,
I dress well in front of the whole world,
But on the inside I am a messed up little girl.
My smile can be bitter & so very sweet,
But I am a girl, who stands on her own two feet,
The words I speak can cut you like a knife,
That’s what comes from having a tainted life.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-07 11:46:46]
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by romayne on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:55:16 AM AEST
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| Great, I like it. Cheers Romayne |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:03:46 PM AEST
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This was good. Thanks for submitting
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST
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Aww Pixie..you are indeed a doll...maybe not a China Doll, but certainly a Doll..... another great write........
Hugs and many thanks
Jenni |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Kie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST
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This was very insightful. Alot of emotion in this one.
It gave a glimpse of who you are, thru your inner eyes.
Kie |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:18:15 PM AEST
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god write pixie well presented.
Johnny
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:25:21 PM AEST
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Your honesty shines in this one Pixie
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:41:05 PM AEST
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you're a strong person and it showes in this poem
awesome write |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:48:35 PM AEST
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it's a very interesting poem.
the last line were the best, but your rhyming through out, as ever, are perfect! |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by jonteD on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:21:08 PM AEST
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| You paint the picture well with your words - you have a gift, the ability to write and make people think. |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:38:44 PM AEST
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wow pixie!
This is a great one! I feel that every word is true too.
I can tell you have been through a lot, have come a long way and are still kicking!
Good for you! |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Alli on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 05:53:57 PM AEST
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| Very well written with a powerful message. Great job as usual. |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by tifrob on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:07:09 PM AEST
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A self-portrait in words. I love the concept... Great write.
J~ |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by venkat on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:01:33 AM AEST
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My dear girl..this is like your bitter sweet smile and I am not afraid of a your knife..
love and hugs.enjoyed this write. venkat
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:10:38 AM AEST
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Awesome poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by pander on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:14:08 AM AEST
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Nice write Pixie!
I would say keep up the good work, but I know you will anyway ;-)
Take care out there.
Luv,
Pander
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:18:14 AM AEST
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Great write... I liked it a lot...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by Red_October on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:06:50 PM AEST
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| Excellent. Very revealing. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: I Am No China Doll
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:27:06 PM AEST
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| a lost soul grieving.....now look who's writing how I feel.......this was perfect.....i love your work |
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