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THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
Contributed by
emystar
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:21:46 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
U neva knew Dee
died right before-n-after
she gave birth to tiny
Tyler's life.
Two weeks she battled
heaven-n-Earth
Too keep him from too
soon birth
Her very first born
U didn't even want
till she'd had enuff
packed to come home.
You raped her in sleep
to plant the seed.
My God, how your
heart must bleed.
Jus 'cause she thought
she'd give it a chance
Without your
bull ****, romance
Know dear sad man
luv isn't controlled
by your hand.
From cutting, raping
to raising a son.
This truth shall be known.
You took a Princess
but only gave hate.
Now tell me U know luv,
well isn't that great!
Play your ugly games
in fright.
Truth shall prevail,
this nite.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-11-07 09:21:46]
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Re: THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:30:43 AM AEST
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wow, powerful write , well expressed,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
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by Kie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:41:04 AM AEST
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This broke my heart to read. I don't know what to say and found it tragic. There are so many monsters in this world.
The pain you feel is evident.
Kie |
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Re: THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:51:17 AM AEST
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Oh Emy, this breaks my heart..... Very touching write.....
Luva nd hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:31:19 AM AEST
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| aww..emy..this gave me goose bumps. the music and pix and words combined. it was very powerful. I loved it. I haven't learned the magic of putting music with my words yet..what a gift you have. If i ever do, I'll stop using my delete button..haha. I have the directions but can't understand..Oh well.. first music I'd use is KISS THIS ROTFLMAO.. great piece emy..love |
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Re: THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:35:59 PM AEST
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Very stong emotion...powerful.
Well dome! |
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Re: THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
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by venkat on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:07:06 AM AEST
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| sad and heart breaking..good emotional expression..venkat |
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Re: THIS UN'S FOR U DENNIS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:03:30 PM AEST
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A very sad write emy, well expressed in your writing.
johnny. |
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