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Byzantine
Contributed by
outsider
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:18:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I dreamed such strange dreams
Byzantine
Stretched to such extremes.
Waking up the sheets are wet
Pillows cast upon the floor
Mobile tossed
Lying like discarded wreckage by the bedroom door.
I dreamed for so long I almost understood
But in the end fingertips merely brushed
And in the end I woke falling endlessly from the weight of oxygen
All of it in my room and outside the world was expectant, hushed
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2004-11-06 23:18:39]
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Re: Byzantine
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:24:47 PM AEST
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Well it's very interesting thought-n-dreams.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Byzantine
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by Lovingangel4u on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:03:16 AM AEST
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| Yes it is a very interesting poem. Life can be just like that. :) JIH |
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Re: Byzantine
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:38:52 AM AEST
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| This makes a lot of sense. I love it. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Byzantine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:53:57 AM AEST
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Yes, it's a mystery to me, but that's the point, no? I wonder why you used Byzantine as an age or as a culture to title this one . ..
enigmatic, for sure. |
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Re: Byzantine
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:35:37 AM AEST
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Nice write. The dream world a reailty unto it's self.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Byzantine
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:38:34 PM AEST
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this is breathtakingly brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Byzantine
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:45:31 AM AEST
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| Nope, didn't make sense. But I like it. The mystery is what makes it fun. |
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