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a poem to pass the time
Contributed by
haligh
on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i hate you for putting me through all this pain
but i love in spite of every thing
i wish you could just step into my soul
i think it would shock you, the pain one can feel
there's no way of healing when you're always around
it's only been a week, a week to grow weaker
they say i should be growing stronger
but "time heals...and i'm forever broken"
every lyric fits me so perfect
and every word spoken seems tragic and trite
keep humming your songs and whispering promises
maybe this time you'll keep them.
Copyright ©
haligh
... [
2002-11-19 23:30:00]
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Re: a poem to pass the time
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:17:47 AM AEST
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| stay strong, keep writing when you feel you just gotta write something to get it out there. times like that i've found make the best thing you never thought you could write. kudos! ;0) |
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Re: a poem to pass the time
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:26:49 AM AEST
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I wouldn't say this isn't a good poem
It came from what was on your mind
and possibly in your heart and that's
what makes a great poem, whether
it's passing time or not, Thanks
for sharing this one i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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