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WHat you dont want to see
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:14:47 PM in AEST
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My face,
My skin,
My body,
My bones,
Forever mine,
Never new,
Always old,
Just plain bronze,
Never gold,
A piece of mush,
The mirror brakes,
When I touch my face,
The whole world quakes,
Tainted, ugly,
Black and blue,
It’d kill a man,
You know it’s true,
Don’t need to lie,
Don’t need to praise,
Don’t need to continue,
Your half scared glaze,
Just turn away,
Just like before,
I couldn’t ask,
For very much more,
This is my face,
Will always be,
Another piece of myself,
You won’t want to see
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2004-11-06 23:14:47]
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Re: WHat you dont want to see
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:21:09 PM AEST
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Very powerfull message but I think in the right cicumstances we all would.
I jus pray I never have to go there.
Very honest write.
good explantion of ones innervision.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: WHat you dont want to see
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by Row on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:16:48 AM AEST
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| a very good style you got there |
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Re: WHat you dont want to see
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:38:06 AM AEST
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such a sad write. always remember that you are
beautiful.
love always, dizza
xoxoxoxox |
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Re: WHat you dont want to see
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by happybunnyfan on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:37:43 AM AEST
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i love it. it's what everybocy thinks. just know looks don't count it's what's on the inside that counts.
great write |
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Re: WHat you dont want to see
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:16:49 AM AEST
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awww this is very sad and deep, sorry you feel like this,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: WHat you dont want to see
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:44:41 PM AEST
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I bet you are a beautiful person. It doesn't matter what others think. Great poem, awesome style.
Spazzo |
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