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Day And Night
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:49:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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See the sun kiss the mornings face-
As the moon goes to some other place-
Another day begins with sunny skies-
While the moon hides his crying eyes…
The night has now gone away-
For a while the sun is here to stay-
And I am here right by your side-
But unlike the moon, I will never hide…
All I need have is just the chance-
To show you a life of love and romance-
For without you I will not see-
The man that I so wish to be…
The sun now has given way to the night-
And the moon is here to shed his light-
For I have told him of my feelings for you-
And he is here to help us decide what to do…
I have ask the moon for help from up above-
For he sees all there is to see in this world of love-
So he suggested that I hold you in my arms-
And whisper in your ear words of love and charm…
I understand that things sometimes seem-
That they exist only in the sleeper’s dream-
But I am presently standing here awake-
And about my feelings there is no mistake…
Should you find in me a reason to have doubt-
Then to the sun, the moon, and the world I will shout-
These feelings of love that I hold in my heart-
Have been yours to hold from the start…
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hoist1atca
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2004-11-06 22:49:41]
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Re: Day And Night
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:14:02 PM AEST
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A masterpeice isn't loud enuff to speak the praise in the powerfull yet tender write.
Leaves one with the idea that there is still some luv on this planet.
Luv it!
luv, huggs, smniles,
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Re: Day And Night
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:17:39 AM AEST
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such a sweet write, lovely words,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Day And Night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:55:29 AM AEST
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My friend, I can only hope my loved one feels exactly the same for I know I do. My life is waiting on him so that it may begin once again. Blessings to you.
Rita |
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