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'' A new love''
Contributed by
kizmetskiss
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:11:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You complain about the woes of love from the past,
So tell me why is it you wont help a new love last.
I give you all of me,
My time, my heart, my soul, my body.
And still you cant seem to give to me,
all of yourself emotionally.
When the morning sun first grazes my face,
I awake with thoughts of you in haste.
And at night before I close my eyes,
I inhale deeply that I may savor my life.
Because when youre good ,youre oh so good,
and you make me feel like no other could.
But when it hurts,
It hurts that much worse,
because only you know how to scratch the burn.
At some point I hope,
that you will learn to endure
all the love I have for you, unconditional and pure.
Copyright ©
kizmetskiss
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2004-11-06 22:11:10]
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Re: '' A new love''
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:35:32 PM AEST
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Nice Poem- I like it...
Written with a lot of devotion-
"Sometimes we are not able to see the forest for all of the trees in the way"...
I hope things get better...
Joe |
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Re: '' A new love''
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by New_York_Chick on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:41:36 PM AEST
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I agree with you
I've been one of those people who are stuck on something in the past for far too long, and it took me a while to realize that I could only be happy with what I already have
thanks for writting this poem |
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Re: '' A new love''
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:54:29 PM AEST
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I hear ya loud-n-clear.
Too much excess bagedge only complicates things.
Very good write here.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: '' A new love''
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by desire on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:42:13 PM AEST
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| a very heartfelt peom, im sure many can relate..very well done..loved it,............desire |
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