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My Perfectly Kept Secret
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:59:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My perfectly kept secret
Do you know that you still are
The only one I'm wishing for
On that distant star
All the talk about you
Everyone wanted to be more than a friend
I never admitted to it
Cause before the beginning came the end
Yeah they're all guessing
I am still not quiet over like I said
But who are they to claim you
They wasted their chance and that's too bad
Today I might not need you
But a day will soon come
When I'm willing to do everything
To be your only one
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-11-06 21:59:05]
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Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:18:22 PM AEST
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| Wow. such a message filled with emotion which makes your created poem here Perfection. I want to Thank You for sharing yourself and your awesome talent with myself and other readers. Please keep your ink flowing so your wonderful poems keep growing. Your Newest Reading Fan MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:28:27 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:51:25 AM AEST
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Well I'm glad u captured them cause this is a great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:38:21 AM AEST
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new_york_girl
You have a way about you.
Words ringing truth.
I liked this poem,
but could have been better done.
A little more time.
A little more ryme,
but who am I ?
To question why.
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Re: My Perfectly Kept Secret
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by Cindy359 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 05:29:43 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully written.. |
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