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Why, Nightingale
Contributed by
blain
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:21:19 PM in AEST
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One day, while melancholy,
I saw it in its leafy sea,
Ever so bright and blissfully
The Nightingale would sing for me
Braving miles from Winter home
To bless mine dwelling with cheerful tone
Like cherubic verses together sewn
For mine ears and mine alone
Till one day to my surprise,
I found your song was naught but lies,
Twas not I that caught your eyes
Only then did I realise..
Nightingale, why do you tease me with song,
when you know you do not sing for me..
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blain
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2004-11-06 21:21:19]
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Re: Why, Nightingale
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:27:15 PM AEST
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Very beautifull masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Why, Nightingale
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:32:20 PM AEST
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Re: Why, Nightingale
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by imnohbdy on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 05:09:01 AM AEST
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| A beutifull poem with some heart to it. But I must say that it might be a little better if it was written about someone specific. When you write about things that happened to you or are happening to you the poetry contains a piece of your soul. The old saying goes write what you know. Still however a teriffic write. |
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