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Lonely Journey
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:18:56 PM in AEST
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Freedom failing my oldest belief
What does it matter it did nothing for me
I am a slave to a victimized world
Even on the warmest days it still feels so cold
What can I do to be welcome again
What would it take to be considered a friend
All that I did, I knew I was just
For it was you who abandoned our trust
Trapped in my cell the light blinding my eyes
In all that I did I fought not to be despised
I tried to apologize but you turned away
So then how is it I who is dishing out Hate
I can leave if it would fulfill your desire
I came only to leave after a short while
My time here has ended and I must return
To the land of the hopeless the land of the shunned
Journey alone, my harmonica in my hand
Together with it I will flee from this land
Does this make you happy to drive me away
When once so long ago you wished me to stay
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Re: Lonely Journey
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:27:21 PM AEST
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Very sad but briliantly written.
Hang tuff my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
We may not like change but there's one thing u can be sure change will come.
Life is sad many times but I find joys in the simple things in life.
luv, huggs, friends,
emy |
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Re: Lonely Journey
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:38:37 PM AEST
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| amazing and emotionally powerful write. if leaving is the best thing for you, then you should do it, but if its not you should stay. |
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Re: Lonely Journey
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by Stellar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:39:44 PM AEST
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Very powerful. In some ways I can relate to this.
Take care : ) |
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Re: Lonely Journey
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:47:05 PM AEST
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| awesome, beautiful.. |
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Re: Lonely Journey
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:23:22 AM AEST
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very sad, greatly written,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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