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The Stranger
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:12:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i am a stranger to myself
my own body,
knows me no longer
this virus thrives, under my skin
so sexual and flirty,
to men who look my way
this is not me!
not the way i am,
this is the stranger within me
who flows in my veins, tempting me
altering my minds program
plauging my eternal soul
so, step from me, shadow
and look into my eyes
show me your true form, and i will be set free
rid your filth from my blood stream
you are not, that i despise
clense me of this sin, bath my soul
for all you need be,
is a stranger to me.
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TwEeK
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2004-11-06 20:12:56]
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Re: The Stranger
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:34:16 PM AEST
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rid your filth from my blood stream
you are not, that i despise
clense me of this sin, bath my soul
for all you need be,
is a stranger to me.
A masterpeice 2 all that read this as we alll can say the same and this wite is like unclocking a peice of your soul but u not only show how but u have a very wise write, here.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: The Stranger
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:43:08 PM AEST
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| excellent write. presented very well. |
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Re: The Stranger
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by DesperateSoul on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:00:26 PM AEST
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I knew exactly what this poemmeant to me
as soon as i read it.Similar thoughts and feelings have been my life's reality for years.. |
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Re: The Stranger
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:24:03 AM AEST
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brilliant write, wonderfully expressed,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Stranger
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by Trisha on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:06:48 PM AEST
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| NICES WRITE |
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