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Deal With It
Contributed by
Fluffhead
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 07:46:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I can't move
I can't speek
I can't do a thing
I have to just shut-up.
Deal with it you say
Well I try!
You just push and push!
What!? Am I just to hush!?
Hell no!
Why can't you see!?
I'm not a damn thing!
I can walk
I can talk
Just let me go
Just let me be
I want to be the person I am
Thats all I ask
Know what I'm done saying please
It's my turn now Daddy.
Time for me to say it.
Deal with it
Copyright ©
Fluffhead
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2004-11-06 19:46:30]
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Re: Deal With It
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:18:37 PM AEST
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Very strong write here.
Don't mind listening to rants ocassionally.
One can feel the anger-n-longing to be free in this write.
Sooner or later e will dael with whateva it is that's upset u so.
Great ranting!
Written with a flaire.
I'm sure there are many more out there that have the same feelings.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Deal With It
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:50:49 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Deal With It
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:04:43 PM AEST
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| good write...keep beiung urself |
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