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Please Forgive Me
Contributed by
Catalina
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 03:23:23 PM in AEST
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My heart has fallen upon the floor...
Slammed repeatedly in sorrows door…
Risking it all,
I will make a finial decision…
A life without you,
I can’t envision…
Forgive me now,
I am at your mercy…
For a moment in time,
My sights were blurry…
The haze has lifted…
And one thing remains clear…
I made a choice…
That’s why I am here…
All the while,
I new at heart…
Your love was unconditional,
From the very start…
Copyright ©
Catalina
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2004-11-06 15:23:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Please Forgive Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:00:33 PM AEST (User
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this was a very beautiful write. expresses alot of love. again the rhyme was very smooth and steady.
loved this one.
great work
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