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Troubled times
Contributed by
movax
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:53:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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What the hell is going on
Everything in this world is wrong,
We wish to change for the better
But we always get kicked down
Analyse the situation
And ask yourself the question,
Is it because of me?
Or what I've done to thee?
Stupid answer I do conclude
Just another stupid white dude,
Is there anything that I could write
That could make things alright?
I don't know, do you?
You're a better person if you do
Copyright ©
movax
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2004-11-06 13:53:57]
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Re: Troubled times
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by alwayslost on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 02:06:19 PM AEST
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| boy i kno how that goes. i wish i knew how 2 make things right in the world. or @ least in my life or in the lives of ppl who deserve it. theres alot of great ppl out there who deserve more than they have. thanx 4 a great read! it made me think(OW!)lol, seriously tho thanx |
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Re: Troubled times
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by alwayslost on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 02:06:31 PM AEST
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| boy i kno how that goes. i wish i knew how 2 make things right in the world. or @ least in my life or in the lives of ppl who deserve it. theres alot of great ppl out there who deserve more than they have. thanx 4 a great read! it made me think(OW!)lol, seriously tho thanx |
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