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Forgetting Myself
Contributed by
crazylady
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:42:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I don’t know who you are anymore.
But I don’t know myself anymore either.
I see your face
But I don’t recognize you.
Just as I see an unfamiliar face in the mirror.
Each morning I try to convince myself who I am.
And each day I fail.
I forget myself when I try to forget you.
You were a part of me.
And as I try to forget your part,
I forget my own.
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crazylady
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2004-11-06 13:42:42]
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Re: Forgetting Myself
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:49:11 PM AEST
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| The idea of being so much a part of someone is a common beleif. You have captured well the other side of that coin...well done. |
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Re: Forgetting Myself
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:56:41 PM AEST
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Strong message and emotional power in this piece. Well written, good job!
Laurie |
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Re: Forgetting Myself
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:34:09 AM AEST
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aww sad write,I hope that you can find yourself again one day,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Forgetting Myself
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by crazylady on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:09:17 PM AEST
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| im so glad that ive finnaly found a website where ppl can tell me honestly what they think of my poems. thank yall so much for taking the time to sit down and read my poems. theyre all that i had wheni went thru my depresion last year and this one in particular helped me sooo much to move on. thank yall! |
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Re: Forgetting Myself
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by DesperateSoul on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:35:59 AM AEST
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| Forgetting has become a defense mechanism for me....... it's broken me down too.... Great write! Keep Posting! |
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Re: Forgetting Myself
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 10:49:51 PM AEST
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Very sad poem. I can relate in a way.
Scott |
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