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The Contradictions Of Life
Contributed by
movax
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:41:13 PM in AEST
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The Mona Lisa without a smile
A painting that never dries,
A bride without a groom
A house without a room
A baby who never cries
Somebody who never dies,
A thief who doesn't steal
A wound that will never heal
Living without food
A world wihout good,
A foe that gets slain
Being hurt without pain
I wish I could be a better person
But this world just holds me down
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movax
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2004-11-06 13:41:13]
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Re: The Contradictions Of Life
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by crazylady on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:46:26 PM AEST
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wow! that is seriously deep! i wish i could accomplish what you did in my work. or @ least amount up to half of that! thats so awesome! keep up the awesome work and thanx 4 an awesome read!
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Re: The Contradictions Of Life
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 04:21:07 PM AEST
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So very sincere,
and I can relate to
all of this.
It's a really good poem.
I loved it.
--Mothy |
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Re: The Contradictions Of Life
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:11:27 PM AEST
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| wow...wonderful |
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