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A Rain of Tears
Contributed by
llamaluver
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:58:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Outside
The rain pours
Slowly
Inside
I lay on my bed
Crying
The trees outside
Are wet with rain
The pillow under my head
Is soaked with tears
I try not to think about
The things he did to me
The way he hit me
It hurts
But
I think about
How he told me
That he loved me
And I think I love him back
Then I feel
My bruises ache
And I realize
That he is my first mistake
Copyright ©
llamaluver
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2004-11-06 09:58:57]
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Re: A Rain of Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:05:52 AM AEST
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i am sorry for your pain, and for your tears, sometimes tears re,mind us that when something hurts it is not good, a very deep and emotional write, i hope that in time your pain will fade *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: A Rain of Tears
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:09:09 AM AEST
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wow im sorry really really sorry PLEASE you don't have to take my advice but if he hit you once he will hit you twice and it will keep going no women should take a buise from any man... IM SORRY AND HERE FOR YOU..
Great write
HeNo UnKnOwN BUTtErfLY |
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