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In the day
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:33:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the silence
I gazed into your sweet
honest eyes
wishing I could catupre that look for myself
In the darkness of the night
I reached for your arms to hold me close
In the morning
I woke to the dawn of the day
wishing you were here
**JENNA*
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PhantomVampyress
... [
2004-11-06 05:33:27]
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Re: In the day
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:37:53 AM AEST
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Cool poem.. i know exactly what you felt, i love this poem very well written.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: In the day
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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| Another great write. I can feel what you feel , but not for that kind of love. |
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Re: In the day
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:34:45 PM AEST
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U should send this to Halmark.
/awesome write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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