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DARKNESS
Contributed by
destinyfate
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:25:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Surrounded by darkness, the stars brightly shine.
I gaze up at the sky as if it's all mine.
The darkness being the sky's only friend,
with no other sound but the breezy wind.
A star falls from the sky,
another night passes by.
Leaving nothing but the sun to rise,
as the darkness around me slowly dies.
Copyright ©
destinyfate
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2004-11-05 23:25:16]
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Re: DARKNESS
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:28:10 PM AEST
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Very good write and I enjoyed the veiw u painted here in words.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: DARKNESS
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by girish on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 12:34:46 AM AEST
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| when sun rises brightness becomes the friend of sky. |
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Re: DARKNESS
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 12:49:26 AM AEST
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This is such a sad poem written nicely.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: DARKNESS
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:50:09 AM AEST
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| Tonya, I am so impressed with your writing ability to paint such a complete picture with the words you put together and create a Master Piece. In just a few lines here you have a beginning and an ending. Great Job. Your Dear Friend. MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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