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What I Need
Contributed by
Grae
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:52:23 PM in AEST
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If I could just breathe and erase my life, I wouldn't have to clinch to this knife. If I could just scream and scrape off my face, Iwouldn't have to have tolerance for this place. Not for this place, not for this time, wouldn't despise my mom for her sexual crime, if not for this time, if not for this place, I would have a peaceful look upon my face. My skin grows old, my heart slowly rots, my eyes oddly start to see dots. I'm wasting away as the years go by, 23 soon, but never afraid to die, But when I do what becomes of them, for they are the threads to this soul's hem.
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2004-11-05 21:52:23]
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Re: What I Need
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:00:12 PM AEST
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Re: What I Need
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:55:31 AM AEST
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this is a powerful write, great job.
Hugs,
Jane |
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