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Sacrifice
Contributed by
Sordida
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:57:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I sacrificed my dignity
I sacrificed my home
I gave you what you wanted
And let you stop your roam
I don’t know I did it
I put you over me
And I’m still obsessing
God please set me free
I can not stand remembering
I can not stand the fact
That this is what’s inside of me
I want to go back
When life was clean and easy
And my face was dry each night
When facing all the roses
Not start crying at the sight
I sacrificed my happiness
I sacrificed it all
To give you what you wanted
And while bleeding now I fall
Copyright ©
Sordida
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2004-11-05 19:57:37]
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Re: Sacrifice
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by humboldthunny17 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:01:07 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:43:49 PM AEST
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| i really like it. the rhyming pattern gives it a nice flow. great job! |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:00:50 PM AEST
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| amazing and powerful write. i have a friend that is a sacrificer, sometimes he hurts himself more that way than i wish him to... |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by hoist1atca on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:36:24 PM AEST
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Good poem-
A lot of emotional pain-
I hope things are better...
Joe |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:52:15 PM AEST
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| awesome! |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by lostlady38 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:04:41 PM AEST
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| love this poem. can relate a lot. it really hits home. |
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