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You Don't Notice Me
Contributed by
CrimsonOrgazm
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:26:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I could be what you like and
I could be what you want and
Anything you need
I would do it for you
But you don't notice me
I see what they do to you
I see the pain you're going through
But you don't notice me
Or that I feel it too
I see you for who you are
For the friend you are
You are a big part of me
But you don't notice me
It kills me deep inside
It always makes me cry
The way I feel for you
I wish you felt it too
But you don't notice me
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CrimsonOrgazm
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2004-11-05 19:26:33]
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Re: You Don't Notice Me
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by humboldthunny17 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:33:16 PM AEST
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| Lol... i've written poems like that when I was younger. Isn't it a treasure to go back and read your feelings!?!? |
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Re: You Don't Notice Me
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:49:09 AM AEST
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Hmm... I don't know why I didn't notice this poem before. =/ Oh well. This is actually really good. The flow feels natural and the theme carries itself very well.
On another note, almost every poem I find that I wrote a long time ago just seems freakin' horrible. Don't go digging in my earliest entries, lol. XD |
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