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Shroom Hor
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:47:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I keep trying...
You keep winning.
I keep believing...
You keep decieving.
Rip me up,
forget to put me back together.
Set me up,
and stage my mind.
Trick my soul,
and lend me tears.
["Suffer not yourself to be betrayed with a kiss"]
["..."]-A Quote From a Story....
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Sirena_Degana
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2004-11-05 18:47:47]
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Re: Shroom Hor
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:03:53 PM AEST
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"forget to put me back together"
that line is beautiful
I feel like you put my emotions that I couldn't describe into words
great poem |
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Re: Shroom Hor
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:24:12 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i cant say i understand the title though... |
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