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In The Night
Contributed by
Elven_Goddess
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:41:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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In the night,
I am like a shadow on your wall,
In the night,
You can hear my call,
In the night,
You fear what you can't see,
In the night,
You pray you can see me,
In the night,
I'm the cold shiver running down your spine,
In the night,
Everything is not fine,
In the night,
You hold onto your pillows tight,
In the night,
In your dreams we shall fight,
In the night,
You'll discover I am not real,
In the night,
We'll see how you truly feel.
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Elven_Goddess
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2004-11-05 18:41:13]
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Re: In The Night
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by Red_October on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:51:36 PM AEST
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| scarey & well presented! let the ink flow! Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: In The Night
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by SLipSiX on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:21:53 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem, I dont know what else to say, I miss you. |
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Re: In The Night
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by Stoney1 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:20:22 PM AEST
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| Too much repetitive, "In the ...uh...what was it?...oh yeah; night." |
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