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Untouchable Girl
Contributed by
Sinzx7
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:17:10 PM in AEST
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They say time changes all
Exactly who are they?
Watching you was so exciting
You were very inviting
You needed me I was there
You did the impossible you made me care
I could listen to you for eternity
I wanted to open your mind and see
Then you was gone, nowhere to be found
Yet still I feel forever bound
What did you do while you was away
What made you not want to stay
Now you are back
Did you unpack?
I had no idea what I needed at all
But sexy you are my only downfall
If you was a liquid forever I would drink
I love how you look, act and think
You seem almost too good to be real
The only thing I don’t know is how you feel
Everything I like, you tell me you are
You are so close but still so far
Listen close, outside it is starting to rain
I wish it could wash away all of your pain
I liked you then, I like you now I’ll like you forever
You are perfection, so complex, so simple, so clever
The untouchable girl
You make my head swirl
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Re: Untouchable Girl
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by PoetChick on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:44:29 PM AEST
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| I love your poems and you make me very curious as to who Brenda is and what the obsession with her is all about. |
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Re: Untouchable Girl
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:48:49 PM AEST
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Sounds like she must be quite the girl. Amazing to hold so much power over you. Almost an obsession....hopefully not too negative of one. Nice depiction of your feelings for her.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Untouchable Girl
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by Sinzx7 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:12:24 PM AEST
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| The sweetest obsession I have ever known. In a good way of course. She is the only addiction I have ever had...and yes, she is quite the girl. Words can't begin to describe her. Like a rollercoaster. |
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Re: Untouchable Girl
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by theMoth on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:37:14 PM AEST
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Groovy.
--Mothy |
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