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drugs r how i died
Contributed by
kRaZyChIcKo9
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:54:39 PM in AEST
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drugabuse
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i remember that night clearley
when HE took me to that place
HE told me it would be ok
so i believed him
HE told me he'd done it many times before
so i felt it would be ok
HE lit it up and took a puff
then he handed it to me
now here i am in my hospital bed
overhearing what the doctor said
he told my mom because what i did
i wouldn't live long
HE told me it would be ok
but HE lied to me as u can see
so dont do what i did
and then u might live
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2004-11-05 14:54:39]
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Re: drugs r how i died
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by Sinzx7 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:32:22 PM AEST
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Re: drugs r how i died
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:27:24 PM AEST
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Nice poem... sad... sad that somewhere it goes on everyday. It's makes want to cry... b/c I think of all the teens I know... who probably are doing this... It makes my heart want to break.
Good write.
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