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My problems
Contributed by
kRaZyChIcKo9
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:46:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i think of my problems and pain
i think of them until i go insane
i think of all the smiles that
i have given to hide the pain underneath
nobody really knows that i have so much grief
my tears flow inside underneath my eyes
and each time i try to tell you
my words come out as lies
these days i am feeling far away
far away and weak
my saddness pulls me farther from the happiness i seek
i just realised my hopes and dreams are gone
i am waling down a dead-end road
singing a tuneless song
now i am ontop of a roof
although i am scared of heights
i am watching things beneath me move
watching them live life
and sometimes it just doesn't feel right
now i think of what im doing
should i find a way to beat through my depressions?
will i be able to some day?
some one might be there to help me make it through
maybe they will listen
or tell me what to do
im looking through my confusions
starting to trust a few
i think i'll try to make it
so i can be there for them too!
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Re: My problems
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by luckycharm on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:30:30 PM AEST
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| This poem was very sad and I hope that u can see that you are a good person on the inside and out. Iwas depressed one time, and it keeps coming back and going away. But think about the good things in life and pray because god will always be here to help us. And if u need someone to talk to, my name is Pamela, and you can talk to me. Take care-luckycharm. |
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Re: My problems
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:18:45 PM AEST
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Hey we all have problems... but we can't let our problems overtake us... we must have faith to go on! Pamela is right God is there... He cares and wants to help u... Seek Him and he will light the way to a glorious future...
I have tried to keep up with ur poetry b/c u r such a good writer... but haven't really been on here lately... U r one of my favorites! Hope everything has worked out for u... if u want to talk or something just PM me or email me okay?
~Donna~ |
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