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rejection- plz take time 2 read
Contributed by
no_angel_y2k
on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Its weird when I think, the first time that we met,
That wild exciting moment –a day I’ll never forget.
I knew I was very stupid, and wrong 4 liking you,
But there was sumthing bout the way you luked;
I hoped u liked me too!
If only then I knew, wat trouble it wud bring,
I would neva hav asked 4 your number, or request to ring.
My life was goin great; my mates had called it quits,
I had no probs at all but a boyfriend who luved me to bits!
But deep down I wasn’t happy, was luking for sumthing more,
It seems my prayers were answered,
when you walked through that door.
You weren’t like anyone else, I have ever met,
You actually new me for me, or so I liked to bet.
The fact you didn’t like me, didn’t bother me at the time,
I just wanted to talk to you, for me that was fine.
It seems now I lost it everything for you, the perfect life I had,
I’m single lonely and depressed, and the boy situation is bad!
You’re the first boy to reject me; I didn’t take it well,
I started messing people about; it was like a living hell.
The anger built up inside of me, I didn’t no what to do,
So I turned to knifes, to split my wrists in two.
I used to sit there every night, ill from all the crying,
Shoving Jafa cakes in my mouth, sick to death of trying.
Now I can stand here tall, and say I’m over you,
For once I am in control, can do what I want to do!
But I don’t understand, after all this mess,
Why last week did I receive that happy friendly txt?
I don’t want you in my life no more,
So Goodbye, Bon Voyage, Tsuchus!
Go find a leggy blonde to shag, to give to an ego boost!
Copyright ©
no_angel_y2k
... [
2002-11-19 15:00:00]
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Re: rejection- plz take time 2 read
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 03:06:38 PM AEST
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I can certainly understand where
your coming from with this poem, i've
been here before, but i wasnt rejected
until my heart was so deeply involved
and promises were made to me and
things were said that were so deep
that it really cut to the bone when i got
thrown away, I can clearly say that
i've been in that dark place where
cutting was my answer, and it lurks
on me even today..My heart goes out
to you...I really enjoyed this poem alot
Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: rejection- plz take time 2 read
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by foolish on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 06:11:56 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem but just rmember: No man is worth your tears and the one who is won't make you cry. Or so i've heard. Anyway keep writting and good luck with finding your guy. |
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Re: rejection- plz take time 2 read
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:58:50 PM AEST
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| i agree no man is worth your tears! Dont let them do this to you!Tsuchus,German I know this! Great poetry for your first!Christina |
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Re: rejection- plz take time 2 read
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:20:07 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Soph.. this is an excellent poem.. Really gets the message across.... (but being a teacher, I would have preferred seeing it in standard English)..but don't mind me.. :>)
Keep on writing and I hope to see more of your work here soon..
Jenni |
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