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Untitled
Contributed by
punk_casualties
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:32:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Lying in this hospital bed,
I close my eyes and cry,
Thoughts Of death,
Roam my mind;
Will I live or die?
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2004-11-05 14:32:05]
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Re: Untitled
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by Nezenic on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:56:06 PM AEST
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| very nice and short. but i think the question is not whether you will live or die, but rather do you want to live or not... |
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Re: Untitled
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:05:17 PM AEST
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Poignant question and poem. Short, sad and well done.
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Re: Untitled
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by theMoth on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:39:02 PM AEST
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Straight to the point.
Nothing wrong with short poems.
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