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Haunting Memories
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 12:22:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I stood over him
He begged me not to
I wanted to stop
I never ment to hurt him
He begged he pleaded for his life
These are my Haunting Memories
I cleanded his blood from the walls
I scrubbed the carpet
Blood all over my hands and knees
he died with such a fight
These are my phsycotic memories
I never knew what it was like to fight to live
I gave up so long ago
I took his life because I wanted someone to take mine
These are my memories
Now I sit behind these bars
His face a constant reminder of why im here
The memory of his hands blocking my knife and fist
The vision of the abulance taking him away
These are my phsycotic memories
His eyes now have become mine
Blood that i have desperetly tried to clean
Sticks to my hands like poison
Years behind these bars and no one to turn to
Had drove me to the Brink of insanity
My memories of the life I once lead before.
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Re: Haunting Memories
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 12:48:04 PM AEST
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wow that was dark and vry good, me liked alot,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Haunting Memories
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 12:54:16 PM AEST
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haunting and intense stuff.
hey, i hope that this didn't really happen. |
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Re: Haunting Memories
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 06:18:58 AM AEST
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Woah, intense.
Dark indeed, but I like it. Hopefully it's just a good piece of fiction though! Oh, you may want to double check for typos before you post...there's a few throughout this write...Good poem.
Scorp. |
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Re: Haunting Memories
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:04:14 PM AEST
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haha i thought this
was about scorp at first
cuz i saw she commented on this
my bad :)
this was unexpcted
good read and poem
so very sad and well put
Keep it up |
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