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I Come From Hell
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:53:40 AM in AEST
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I am a little girl & I come from hell,
But it is my dad that’s known so well,
He is known by many different names,
Called cruel for all his sadistic, little games.
I have witnessed many people he has killed,
You’d have thought it would have made me ill,
But now I have developed a bit more than a taste,
To dispose of humans like you would of waste.
I dream of killing, spilling human blood,
It makes me smile all over, I feel so good,
The more they struggle the better it is for me,
As then I get to laugh with so much added glee.
I always look deep into my victims dying eyes,
It’s music to my ears to hear their curdled cries,
I want to make my father so very proud,
So in my world anything nasty is allowed.
In my head I have so many dark thoughts,
It’s not my fault it’s the way I’ve been taught,
I am the devils daughter of that I’m born & bred,
As soon as I see you, you soon will be dead.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-05 11:53:40]
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:56:59 AM AEST
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Wow Krissie, If I wasn't so tired I'd probably have nightmares. lol.
*Shudders*
Um..nice...um..images there hunni.
Teehee. Great write, I adore your dark writes.
*Huggies* Phil xxx |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 12:58:15 PM AEST
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another fantastic write here pixie!
well done, i congratuate you again fo your skill and style. |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by a_bear on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 01:13:59 PM AEST
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| what can I say? i want to walk in the room with a loaded gun and mow down the freakin world..then laugh like a banshee..shall we go hand in hand??? great write |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by secretwind on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:16:18 PM AEST
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Another excellent Innervision, from the shadows,we,the crippled pilgrims
feel the flow and the thrill of your kill.
The Wind...... |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by theMoth on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:36:17 PM AEST
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Cool poem.
--Mothy |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:37:53 PM AEST
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Quite dark and demented, indeed. Maybe we shouldn't get to know each other on a personal basis...hahaha. But, I love how you put yourself in such a horrific position, and how you so clearly described the emotion. Wonderfully done.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by reprobate on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:06:05 PM AEST
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and why can't we think like this once in a while without any sad judgements against how we feel. it doesn't mean we're going to eat dead burnt bodies...it only means that we are alive and we think and feel. no big deal,huh?
great write, liked it alot.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by venkat on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:06:42 AM AEST
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Awww...!!!!!!..ahhgh !!!!!...ha..ha..its o.k dear..
I enjoyed this poem..write what ever you wish to write..I am here to read ..big hugs :-) venkat |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by katyqueen35 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 02:34:05 AM AEST
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Wow pixie sweetie
your just like me now days depress and angry.What a very express poem you written.
You know i will be here if you need to talk.
take care
hugs |
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Re: I Come From Hell
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:22:02 AM AEST
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Wow now that's "i want my mummy" dark!
Great writing Pixie.
Johnny. |
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