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Dream of Twilight
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:42:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dreaming of the blackend night
watching the twilight drift into the light
you walk across the bruised ground
as you hear echos all around
The air cools down to a sudden chill
and you start to think the dream is real
but with your eyes locked behind darkened walls
you continue to walk down the nights shadowy halls
You come to what seems like the end
but soon the ground and sky start to blend
into an end of time and space its self
you want to wake up and start begging for help
Then your eyes flash open and you lie awake
sweat pours down your face and deep breaths you take
realising the night is nothing to fear
you go back to sleep with not even a tear
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Dragontear27
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2004-11-04 23:42:27]
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Re: Dream of Twilight
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:45:25 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of wise, magical write here.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dream of Twilight
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:08:19 AM AEST
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an amazing write, great rhyming,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Dream of Twilight
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:31:32 AM AEST
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| Deep and intense, nightmarish images, and visual feelings, beautifully written and masterfully composed. |
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