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From:Me To:You
Contributed by
BrookeStar
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:14:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I cry all night and I cry all day
I cry becuase I want you to stay
My love is strong,Your love is weak
My love is there,Your love I can't keep
When your gone and when your near
I will always be in fear
Not because I am afraid of you
I am only afraid to start over new
It feels like someone tied me to a bed
And beat me until I turned all red
This may sound awful but it ain't
It's kinda like you're very faint
I love you so very very much
I can't wait till I have your touch
I hope you hold me, hold me tight
I can't wait until we never fight
It may not seem like it's true to you
But it is to me what more can I do
Copyright ©
BrookeStar
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2004-11-04 22:14:00]
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Re: From:Me To:You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:19:50 PM AEST
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Well go ahead keep writing as u do really good.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: From:Me To:You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:00:25 PM AEST
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wow great write.. sounds like you love this person more than they love you.. if that is so .. they don't deserve you.. but this is a really good write I enjoyed reading it
Peace and hope
*JENNA* |
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Re: From:Me To:You
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by hoist1atca on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:26:45 PM AEST
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Very Good Writting
My first poem was written 31 years ago at the age of 13-
Keep putting the words to paper no matter what anyone has to say-
Do not allo anyone to change youw words or your feelings.
You have great talent.
Joe |
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Re: From:Me To:You
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by Seans_Girl on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 01:48:59 AM AEST
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| Very good! Keep writing |
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Re: From:Me To:You
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:13:49 AM AEST
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powerful and deep, very sad also,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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