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Only A Dream
Contributed by
Midian
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It's dark outside as i settle in my bed,
running throught the day in my mind,
my eyes become heavy and i start to drift away,
to a land where anything is possible,
i find myself surrounded by horses,
beside a shimmering moonlite lake,
but as i look around i see things are contorted,
and not as "perfect" as things first seemed,
i see a leper before me with tears in his eyes,
and woman knelt over a man,
slowly approaching i hear sighs and goodbyes,
as it appears somebody has lost thier life's love,
the woman spins round and starts screaming at me violently,
"are you happy to see what you've done",
as i look down im startled to see what in my hand,
but a knife and my skirt covered in blood,
startled as i am i raise the knife up to my heart
and then suddenly and surely i realise this is,
Only a dream
Copyright ©
Midian
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2004-11-04 22:13:14]
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Re: Only A Dream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:20:05 PM AEST
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| very cool little pice |
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Re: Only A Dream
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:29:29 PM AEST
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| good write. dreams are always entertaining until theyre those censored reoccuring nightmares. |
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Re: Only A Dream
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:59:03 PM AEST
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this is a great write for an idea from a dream i liked it alot
Peace and hope
*JENNA* |
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Re: Only A Dream
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 12:53:26 AM AEST
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More like a nite mare to me.
Great writing.
I'm happy it was only a dream.
good work.
luv, huggs, happy u alive,
emy |
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Re: Only A Dream
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by girish on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 05:39:55 AM AEST
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dear friend,
a nice expression it seemed
feelings suppressed have been redeemed
a story like piece very good
girish |
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Re: Only A Dream
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:19:04 AM AEST
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very good write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Only A Dream
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:33:56 AM AEST
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| Freaky write, visual and intense, graphic and chilly, had me on the edge of my seat, way cool poem, loved it greatly, cheers for sharing such a masterful pice of talent. |
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