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Explain The Life
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:09:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lost visions,
found.
But only for a moment it seems.
Just tell me what to do.
Tell me how to live,
without these awful dreams.
Soulful eyes,
closed.
But during a lifetime of hate.
Scream and shout so painfully,
Scared to take a breath,
just too scared to wait.
A heart once left,
unbroken.
I died a death so lonely.
With no one to hold,
to keep,
to be my one and only.
My scars so visably,
transaprent.
Show me how to feel.
Left hand clasping a silver knife,
the right wanting to know the truth.
Tell me this love is real.
Copyright ©
2ndChance
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2004-11-04 22:09:37]
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Re: Explain The Life
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:36:07 PM AEST
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| powerful, amazing, and emotional write. |
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Re: Explain The Life
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:28:15 PM AEST
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Very powerfull, full with hurt-n-agonoy.
Hang in there 'cause there's got to be much beauty in your heart or u couldn't write this deep.
Pleas find your inner beauty and hopefully life willl be more meaningfull to u.
Prayers, luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, inner peace,
emy |
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Re: Explain The Life
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:17:40 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it!!! |
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Re: Explain The Life
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:20:46 AM AEST
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very, very good write, emotional and expressive,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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