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No Compassion
Contributed by
lucyspoetry
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:15:36 PM in AEST
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No Compassion
Wish I knew what to do.
Wish I knew what to say.
Wish I knew how to act when around You.
Wish I knew how to be myself everyday.
For You, I try my best not to fight.
For You, I try to build a pleasant future.
For You, I fall to tears at night.
For You, I turn into this creature.
When in spite all these things I do,
When in spite all these things I say,
You don't show the slightest compassion;
Not even in the slightest way.
Written by *~*Lucy*~*
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lucyspoetry
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2004-11-04 21:15:36]
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Re: No Compassion
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:20:16 PM AEST
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Very strong write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: No Compassion
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:33:43 PM AEST
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| Just shows..be the best that you can be..for you. great write. |
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Re: No Compassion
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:40:59 PM AEST
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sometimes we pour our hearts out for someone
at other times we try so hard to be who they want us to be
only to find it does not matter to them at all. then we become ourselves and find there is another who is caring for the pains in our heart.
super write.
the voice
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Re: No Compassion
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:51:41 PM AEST
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| excellent and amazing write. written well. compassion is declining in people these days. society...::sigh:: |
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Re: No Compassion
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 11:41:40 PM AEST
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| I commented on this when I was a_bear..my comment still stands..LOL. |
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