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The Asylum
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:06:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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brittle madness
stains my skin
straight jacket wraps round me like a vine
histeric laughter
damned to this white padded hell
realitlys at fault
sick in the head
trapped by demons wake
florecent lights burn my eyes
locked doors, barred windows
all you can do is sit and dream
quietly die
fake happiness on the workers faces
so plastic as i scream
long corridor
small windowed doors
mental sickness
plauges me
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-11-04 20:06:44]
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Re: The Asylum
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:10:25 PM AEST
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| great write. ive had a friend be in lock down a few times, she thinks they are life changing experiences. |
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Re: The Asylum
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:34:22 AM AEST
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ohh very good, great description,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Asylum
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:48:35 PM AEST
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| Very well written poem, especially for never experiencing what you're speaking of. I've been "institutionalized" before, and you nailed many of the images and emotions. Great job! |
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