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Today
Contributed by
nessiecat
on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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After the rain,
the colours in the sky are mine.
After the storm,
the sun appeared to warm my life.
After it all,
I’m just as old, but twice as wise – today.
After the pain,
the wound will heal if given time.
After the fight,
the challenger will stand in line.
After it all,
I’m just as old, but twice as wise - today.
After the sounds,
of man’s machines are driven out.
After the light,
disappears into the night.
After it all,
I’m just as old, but twice as wise – today.
After the dreams,
that I have never lived before.
After today,
I will always search for more.
After it all,
I’m just as old with twice the life – today.
Copyright ©
nessiecat
... [
2002-11-19 09:30:00]
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Re: Today
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 10:02:58 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful write with
such a good message behind it
Just as old ith twice the life i love
that last line. Thanks for sharing
this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Today
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:11:42 AM AEST
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Nessiecat, this is an awesome write.. I loved it...
Jenni |
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Re: Today
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by LJ on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 02:27:39 PM AEST
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Wow! This is awesome. I just want to say wow a lot right now. Wow! I am going to put this on my wall. I too know what this feels like and you put it to words so perfectly!
Thank you! |
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Re: Today
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by Nessiecat on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 07:35:09 PM AEST
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| Thank you guys. Those comments mean so much coming from writers like you :) |
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