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Journey Into My Past
Contributed by
mysticpoet
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:53:17 PM in AEST
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I sail the oceans of my mind, A journey into my past.
Searching for answers given long ago, to find peace
and tranquillity at last.
I'm searching for words to guide me, said by
a man who loved me so,
Words to help me through troubled times, words whispered
so long ago.
They're like a beacon of light casting rays of hope over a
darkened bay.
His love guides me through life, turning darkness into day.
Like the light that guides the ships safely home at last,
His words guide me safely as I sail the oceans of my mind to my past.
My journey takes me back to my youth, when my Dad and I would talk.
Words that now lead me through life as we hand in hand would walk.
I'd tell him my troubles, somehow he'd make them right,
We'd pray for Gods' guidance as he tucked me in at night.
What by Father taught me was to trust in God above,
Peace and tranquillity will be yours; if you believe in Gods' Love.
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Re: Journey Into My Past
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:09:07 PM AEST
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awww so sad , but written with such beauty,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Journey Into My Past
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by shelby on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:09:13 PM AEST
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this is beautiful its so wonderful you had a relationship like that with your father hold onto him in your heart until the time comes you'll reunite again
Michelle |
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Re: Journey Into My Past
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by Kie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:57:52 AM AEST
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My heart goes out to in sympathy for your loss.
You did a fine job expressing how you feel.
Keep those good memories close.
Kie |
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Re: Journey Into My Past
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:04:48 AM AEST
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This one really touches my heart.
My father will be gone 8 years in January.
awesome rmemberences will make a lonly nite shine.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
A masterpeice 'cause we all have dads even if their phycical body has played out.
You've imortalized beautifull memories that will melt even the coldest heart. |
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