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Fall
Contributed by
flash_16
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:04:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How do I start to begin to spill my heart?
The words I want to say, I have no thought.
Today is a new beginning for the end of my start.
There is a storm breaking in my heart,
and soon this dam will break.
I loved, gave, and did it all.
Only to find myself, I'd fall.
You stand there in front of me,
with a face I thought was my friend.
You were all i wanted, all I needed in the end.
I opened my heart and you stole a part.
How do i get it back?!
I lied for you, cried for you, I almost died for you.
I loved, gave, and did it all.
Only to find myself, I'd fall.
I replay the moment in my mind,
wishing I had said something to change the time.
I sit here and wonder what you see in her.
It isn't her beauty or her grace.
Or not even her ugly face.
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2004-11-04 15:04:27]
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Re: Fall
(User Rating: 1 )
by taryn on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:53:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful darling! absolutely gorgeous! |
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Re: Fall
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:13:17 PM AEST
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| That was a very very good Poem I liked it alot I know how you feel I can relate so very well, it has soo much feelings and a little bit of anger in it thank you for sharing! Great Write !! |
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