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Cut
Contributed by
AngelOfDeath
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:57:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see the sharpness of the knife
That soon will be taking away my life.
I put the knife to my skin
And slowly, surely count to ten.
Three seconds gone
My screaming pain will be a song.
Eight seconds past soon my last.
Bright red blood rushes from my veins
The thrusting desertion driving me insane.
I am going to feint
My blood is like paint.
Drawing a picture on my wrist
Sending me into a deepened abyss.
I want to die
Only to defy.
What they think of me
Why cant they see.
And as I there lie
I slowly die.
Copyright ©
AngelOfDeath
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2004-11-04 12:57:18]
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Re: Cut
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 01:31:29 PM AEST
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| I know most suicide poetry is just emotional venting (which I hope this is). You are good with words, I could actually picture the blood like paint. This is excellent. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Cut
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:28:10 PM AEST
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a vivid ,dark write, sorry for your pain,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Cut
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:52:53 PM AEST
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That's dark poetry all right.
--MOthy |
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Re: Cut
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:44:27 PM AEST
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this is an awesome write....i loved it....great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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