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Whispers Of Loneliness
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:41:45 AM in AEST
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The whispers of loneliness,
Sweep across your face & caress,
It touches you deep in your heart,
Slowly making your soul fall apart.
It lingers softly in the air,
Letting you know it’ll always be there,
You can hear it in your soundest sleep,
It falls from your eyes when you weep.
It’s wrapped tightly all around,
Making only the faintest of sounds,
Tickling your soft, perfect skin,
Living inside as you breathe it right in.
It echoes inside your empty soul,
Making your heart feel like a lump of coal,
Never a smile will come upon your face,
A feeling of loneliness is one you can’t erase.
You’re left feeling so small & so cold,
I shouldn’t feel this way at 21 years old,
Whispers surround me they’re all I can hear,
Never do I sleep when I know loneliness is near.
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by RhythmBndt on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:02:22 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. I can relate. |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:22:02 PM AEST
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| Pixie, you are so good at putting feelings into words-good write |
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:44:23 PM AEST
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Everyone feels that way sometimes---even at 44 years old. We are all always children inside to some extent. I think that's why God says He is our Father.
Stitch |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:45:49 PM AEST
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| Really touching, emotional whispers. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 02:35:55 PM AEST
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We all hear them Pixie ... sometimes even when we surround ourselves with friends and family. I have been "whispered" to often in places where many people were standing right there next to me.
A wonderful write.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 02:38:40 PM AEST
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This is a very good... heartfelt... emotional write... yes we all have a child inside us... who whispers to us... emotional whispers... it's okay to hear them... to feel them... just don't hang onto to them...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by shelby on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:36:47 PM AEST
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oh so beautiful in its sadness cheer up sweety I do understand this though believe me
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:45:41 PM AEST
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Pixie dear your poems are so full of emotions.
It just about makes me cry.take care.
great write
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by avanottingham on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:14:44 PM AEST
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| Very well written...you have captured an eternal truth for everyone in your poem. |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by faithmairee on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:32:06 PM AEST
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| this is a beautifully written poem...deeply moving and powerful in the delivery...great job, pixie! |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by venkat on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:42:42 AM AEST
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wow..breathtaking..and a really heart touching piece..hugs my dear young lady
this was so beautifully written:-)
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:41:01 PM AEST
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Strong poem. Clear message and shouting emotion. Nicely done.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by Kie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:07:18 PM AEST
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After reading this it makes me ponder what is the answer to lonliness? Our state of minds? Culture? etc etc.
You expressed yourself very well and made me think.
Kie |
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Re: Whispers Of Loneliness
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:15:59 AM AEST
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Awh...such sad sentiments but none the less beautifully penned. Very well put together & though the topic is a sad one, its a very enjoyable read, how well the feeling of loneliness is conveyed. Beautiful piece of work krissie.
Hope it passes soon,
Corinna |
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