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Life Alone
Contributed by
screwup
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:37:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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you destroyed me last night
cutting away my soul
where it used to be
there is a hole
holding it all in
I take the blade
and carve into my skin
blood flowing out
to the newly made sore
you never knew
I always wanted more
my own private hell
every time I tried
I seemed to have fell
you are supposed to feel safe
in your own home
but instead I feel
so alone
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2004-11-04 10:37:41]
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Re: Life Alone
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by Tripod on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:39:58 AM AEST
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| I love it... This one strikes home with me. I know this is an upsetting poem but I can't help but feel excited when I know others feel this way, and truly I am not alone |
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Re: Life Alone
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:40:54 AM AEST
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mmm, i know this feeling only too well.
i'll be online for a while if you wanna chat.
PM me or what ever.
hey great poem by the way!
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Re: Life Alone
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:41:25 AM AEST
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*hugs* aww hun you are not alone, although it feels like that sometimes, I hope that one day you will put the blade down for good, and realise that it does you more harm than good,
emotional poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Life Alone
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:39:11 PM AEST
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Hey Babe...
I agree w/ Pixie... I hope now u can realize this after everything that has happened in the last 72 hours...
This was definitely a sad... sad poem... I've always told you to write what u feel... and u did...
Don't ask me how... but I know u'e going to be okay... hings have got to get better...
Take care...
Love ya...
~Donna~ |
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